The main argument of my article, “Big
Rubrics and Weird Genres”, is that generic rubrics for writing and public
speaking are unproductive and theoretically misguided and therefore they should
be abandoned. In section “contextual dependencies in evaluation”, to prove this
point, authors surveyed different departments in two universities and illustrated
that, even for a same genre, different features of student’s paper are expected
by instructors in different disciplines and therefore using a generic rubrics
cannot provide a reflective assessment. During this process, authors recorded faculty
members’ opinions about their writing expectations in WEC (Writing-Enriched
Curriculum program) meetings in different departments to demonstrate that
writing standards vary among different fields. Especially, authors provided many
writing criteria from the Political Science Department in order to compare with
other departments. I think this part can be transformed into a discussion/meeting agenda for students about how to write a research paper. The goal of this transformation is to reflect the argument that a good rubric should discipline-based. To accomplish this goal, I have two different plans:1) write two agendas for students of two different classes, political science and physics. By comparing two agendas, the audience can notice that even for an exactly same genre, the requirement and assessment vary among different fields. 2)I can combine two agendas into a bigger one concerning how to write a good research paper in general. In this bigger agenda, the purpose is to inform students that the benchmark for a good research paper differs in different disciplines. The latter plan can more directly embody the author's idea but the former one is easier to carry out and therefore more likely to be persuasive.
I think the transformation into an discussion agenda is an idea closely related to the topic of this scholarly piece and this
section, “contextual dependencies in evaluation” , because it illustrates that
a specific discipline may require students to perform
analysis from specific aspects or by specific analytic tools.
For older
audience, I plan to write an instructional article, like those we can read on
internet or magazines:” How to Lose Weight Fast” or “10 Things You Should Never
Do When You’re Angry”. In section “design critiques as a ‘weird’ oral genre”,
authors analyzed the design rubric used to evaluate a presentation, which demonstrated a landscape architecture design, conducted by a student called Bethany. In the article,
authors thoroughly interpreted each key criterion in the design critique form,
mentioned Bethany’s grade and explained the reason in terms of the presentation's content and her behaviors. I think this part can be transformed into an instructional article
addressing how to present your design. Since authors have
clearly stated each important element contributing to a good presentation, I
just need to change tone and wording to make its style similar to an
instructional article, such as using “you” to refer to the audience. Also,
authors described many Bethany’s behaviors that caused her to achieve a poor
grade and some elements her presentation lacked. I can make use of these information
to transform them into multiple tips, “things that you should never do in your
presentation”, which are very magazine-y.
From my perspective, an instructional article is a suitable genre that can effectively bear the original information of this part of article. Also, by teaching people what they should be careful about during a presentation, such as responses to the audience, visuals or the argument, it reflects the main idea of the author in this section that the pedagogy of public speaking is much more complicated than teaching students to achieve some simplified goals(such as to inform or to persuade);it should be discipline-based.
From my perspective, an instructional article is a suitable genre that can effectively bear the original information of this part of article. Also, by teaching people what they should be careful about during a presentation, such as responses to the audience, visuals or the argument, it reflects the main idea of the author in this section that the pedagogy of public speaking is much more complicated than teaching students to achieve some simplified goals(such as to inform or to persuade);it should be discipline-based.
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After reading your PB3A, I believe it is a hard job to transform your topic that generic rubrics for writing and public speaking should be abandoned since they are unproductive and theoretically misguide. The topic of your essay is just hard to remember and understand. In addition, you also have several perfect suggestions for changing genre, such as changing the first –person to second or third –person, changing to easy-understanding language and tones. I believe that your genre to older audience is pretty creative, writing an instructional article, which is a perfect idea to older people. Since instructional articles will be accepted by the older and also persuasive to them. The only thing that you need to do is that attract as many reader as you can by your interesting language. However, I think your genres to younger audience is still too complex. Maybe you can think of a more simple and easy-understanding genre. In general, your ideas are pretty good, and I hope you can do your best in WP3.
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ReplyDeleteAs we discussed after class yesterday, yes, I think that “a discussion/meeting agenda for students about how to write a research paper” is a great idea. If part of your goal is to build in the **negotiation of rubrics—which, you claimed is the central argument of this piece (and I agree)—then you need to build in some kind of literate activity that allows individuals professors/students to articulate the specific demands of each writing assignment (instead of just conforming to one generic rubric). So what will be in this meeting agenda? What does a meeting agenda look like? What’s it do? What’s its goal? What IS the “research paper” under examination? (And why haven’t you included/mentioned different genres?) What are the rhetorical features? And who will be included? Will it just be a Poli Sci department, and if so, why? I’m really looking forward to what you’re doing here, and I think you’ve got some great ideas.
I’m unclear about some of your thoughts about the older genre—an instructional article could work, and I think that captures part of what the article says is needed, but I’m not sure what you mean by “how to present your design.” Whose design? Of what? Are you sticking to Bethany’s landscape architecture course? If so, why? (But also: why would this be a “younger” audience? Isn’t this the same aged audience as your other proposal?) You might need to work out the kinks for this one, but overall, it sounds to me like you’re thinking through your purposeful possibilities here.
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